📸 Real student handwriting T.S. · Eiken Pre-2
T.S. · Eiken Pre-2
Essay 1 · Study alone or with others?
6 / 9
Total Score
2/3Content
2/3Grammar
2/3Natural
Corrected Version
I think it is better for students to study alone. I have two reasons.
My first reason is that only one person can study at their own pace.
You can rest anytime and choose any subject.
Second, one person can concentrate more than when studying with others
because you don't talk. So I think it is better for students to study alone.
✦ Corrections — Detail
1
"First opinion is"→"My first reason is that"
In English essays, we don't say "opinion is" to introduce a reason. Use "My first reason is that…" to signal your structure clearly.
英語の作文で理由を述べるときは「My first reason is that…」を使います。
📌 Pattern: My first reason is that + [sentence].
e.g. My first reason is that studying alone helps you focus.
2
"study own pace"→"study at their own pace"
Missing a preposition. The correct fixed phrase is "at their own pace."
前置詞が抜けています。「at their own pace（自分のペースで）」が正しい表現です。
📌 Fixed phrase: at one's own pace
e.g. She studies at her own pace without pressure.
3
"aniy subject"→"any subject"
Spelling mistake — correct spelling is "any."
「aniy」はスペルミスです。正しくは「any（どんな）」です。
📌 Spelling: a-n-y
e.g. You can study any subject you like.
4
"person don't talk"→"you don't talk"
"One person" is third-person singular — needs "doesn't." Using "you" is more natural.
「one person」は三人称単数なので「doesn't」が正しいです。「you」を使うとより自然です。
📌 Rule: He / She / One person → doesn't (not don't)
e.g. When you study alone, you don't get distracted.
✅ Clear opinion in sentence 1 — great structure!
✅ "I have two reasons" shows confident essay organisation.
✅ Good use of "Second," as a linking word.
✅ Conclusion restates the opinion — well done!
⭐ Well done, T.S.!
📋 Let's improve:
| ■ Misspell |
■■ Grammar Miss |
■ Remember! |
| aniy → any | person don't → you don't | at one's own pace |
| — | First opinion is → My first reason is that | My first reason is that + sentence |
| — | study own pace → at their own pace | He/She → doesn't (not don't) |
"Your essay has a clear structure — opinion, two reasons, conclusion. Focus on fixed phrases and subject-verb agreement. You're almost there! 🌿"
📸 Real student handwriting T.S. · Eiken Pre-2
T.S. · Eiken Pre-2
Email Drill 1 · Reply to Alex — Volunteer Program
5 / 9
Total Score
2/3Content
1/3Grammar
2/3Natural
Corrected Version
Hi, Alex!
This volunteer program sounds amazing! I have two questions.
First, what time will this event start next month?
Second, is the volunteer work free?
About your question, I think the experience will be useful for children in the future.
Best wishes,
✦ Corrections — Detail
1
"This volunteer is very amazing"→"This volunteer program sounds amazing"
"Volunteer" alone means a person. Add "program." Also, "sounds amazing" is more natural when reacting to news.
「volunteer」だけだと「人」の意味になります。「program」を加えましょう。「sounds amazing」の方が自然な反応表現です。
📌 React to news: That sounds amazing!
e.g. Your plan sounds amazing! Tell me more.
"Seconds" means time or extra food. The linking word is "Second," not "Seconds."
「Seconds」は「60秒」や「おかわり」の意味です。接続詞は「Second,（第二に）」が正しいです。
📌 Linking words: First, → Second, → Finally,
e.g. First, I like cats. Second, I like dogs.
Handwriting merged "work free." "Is the volunteer work free?" means "Does it cost money?"
手書きで「work free」が「rkfree」になったようです。「Is the volunteer work free?（参加費は無料ですか？）」が正しい表現です。
📌 Asking about cost: Is it free? / Is there a fee?
e.g. Is it free to join the event?
4
"experience in chirdren"→"useful for children"
"In children" doesn't work — use "for children." Also "chirdren" is misspelled; correct is "children."
「in children」は不自然です。「for children（子どもたちにとって）」が正しいです。「chirdren」はスペルミスで正しくは「children」です。
📌 Spelling: c-h-i-l-d-r-e-n | Preposition: useful for (not in)
e.g. This experience will be useful for children in the future.
✅ Used "About your question," correctly — perfect email structure!
✅ Asked exactly two questions as required — task completed!
✅ Good future tense: "will be useful in the future."
✅ Polite closing "Best wishes," is exactly right for Eiken emails.
⭐ Well done, T.S.!
📋 Let's improve:
| ■ Misspell |
■■ Grammar Miss |
■ Remember! |
| chirdren → children | volunteer → volunteer program | That sounds amazing! |
| rkfree → work free | Seconds → Second, | First, / Second, / Finally, |
| — | experience in → useful for | useful for (not in) |
| — | — | c-h-i-l-d-r-e-n |
"You followed the email format perfectly — two questions plus an answer. Clean up spelling and word choices, and this becomes a very strong answer. Keep it up! 🌿"